In Stitches
March 13, 2016 at 12:58 pm | Posted in Australia, Nature, Poetry, Writing | 27 CommentsTags: creativity, gratitude, Lake Macquarie NSW, Morisset Show, nature
I have been occupied with other things than this blog lately. However, I would like to share a poem with you that I wrote a few years ago. It is about the beautiful Lake Macquarie where I live, and how I saw it one day as I walked along the shore.
The poem was recently commended in the Morisset Show Poetry Competition.
Wangi Bay stretches before me,
a coarse wind-ruffled
grey-green fabric;
patches of dirty brown
rain-stirred run-off
tacked onto it here and there
like jungle-camouflage.
Silver sequins
tossed onto the watery quilt
tumble and sparkle among
the grey jetty stripes and squares
and the multi-coloured
ship-shaped pieces
that have been tacked on
with contrasting whitecap stitches.
Here and there,
in out-of-the-way places
an occasional dot
of white embroidery –
a bobbing seagull or pelican.
A narrow, irregular strip
of breaking waves
marks the inner border
separating the nautical pattern
from its dark green edging
of eucalypt and casuarina
and spiky Lomandra longifolia
Today, the lake is a patch-work quilt
that I would like to take home with me.
© Linda Visman
11th October, 2010
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Beautiful piece
Comment by Ponderer_With_A_Pen/MisFit_Bounded_By_Word— March 13, 2016 #
Many thanks. 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 13, 2016 #
Your welcome
Comment by Ponderer_With_A_Pen/MisFit_Bounded_By_Word— March 14, 2016 #
Lovely poetry.
Comment by mukul chand— March 13, 2016 #
Thank you very much 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 13, 2016 #
welcome
Comment by mukul chand— March 14, 2016 #
That’s beautiful, Linda. I love the metaphor of the quilt, so original and your descriptions are exquisite. I can understand why it was recognized. 🙂
Comment by D. Wallace Peach— March 13, 2016 #
Many thanks Diane. 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 13, 2016 #
A lovely poem, Linda.
Comment by Kristah Price— March 13, 2016 #
Thank you Kristah. Glad you liked it. 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 13, 2016 #
Wow, what a way to describe the lake and its shore! Absolutely beautiful!
I’m visiting from the a to z challenge and looking forward to more 💚
Comment by Miss Andi— March 14, 2016 #
Thanks Miss Andi So glad you liked it. 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 14, 2016 #
It says it all, Linda. The picture’s in my mind – you love the water, don’t you? So do I.
Comment by frederick anderson— March 14, 2016 #
I sure do love the water, Frederick. When I moved inland at age 20 when I married & started teaching, it took some time for me to get used to the open plains of Central West NSW. It is lovely to be near the lake and the ocean again. 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 14, 2016 #
A charming poem, Linda 🙂
Comment by Margaret Lynette Sharp— March 15, 2016 #
Lovely writing Linda. So glad you are nearly finished your manuscript! We’ll have to catch up again
Comment by Debbie Robson— March 18, 2016 #
Thanks Debbie. 🙂 Yes, we’ll have to catch up – it’s been a while! Might have to wait until late April though – family commitments until then. 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 18, 2016 #
Same here!
Comment by Debbie Robson— March 19, 2016 #
Good to visit your site as a part of my A to Z visits. My theme Blog Promotion
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Comment by Prof NRao— March 27, 2016 #
Thanks for calling in Prof! 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 28, 2016 #
Hi Linda, great blog and thanks for joining AZ! Could you add the 2016 challenge badge to the sidebar?
Damyanti, AZ cohost 2016
Comment by Damyanti Biswas— March 29, 2016 #
Hi Damyanti & thanks for dropping in.
Unfortunately, I have to withdraw from the A to Z this year due to family commitments that involve travel & lack of time for other things. That’s why I haven’t posted the A-Z badge.
The same reason is why I couldn’t get my blog posts ready ahead of time.
I do hope I can get back into the A-Z next year.
Hope it all goes well! 🙂
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— March 29, 2016 #
Linda come back to blogging. We miss you here.
I am blogging about positive psychology and self help tips. Do drop and share: http://www.consumerpsyche.com
Comment by Tiger Vamshi— April 4, 2016 #
Lovely! Are you doing the A-Z? ~Liz http://www.lizbrownleepoet.com
Comment by Liz Brownlee— April 8, 2016 #
Hi Liz. Unable to participate this year due to family commitments. Hope to return to A2Z next year. 🙂 Thanks for dropping by.
Comment by Linda Visman - wangiwriter— April 10, 2016 #
I love how my author friends are breaking forth in poetry, you included, Linda. Thank you!
Comment by marianbeaman— April 20, 2016 #
How beautiful! I love the imagery.
I’m glad you left a comment on my blog so I could find yours. Of course I recognize your name now. 🙂
Comment by lkhunsaker— April 22, 2016 #